We have just finished our four picture story I am quite pleased with mine.
Here it is
The Amazing Day
It was the beginning of a long day at school. I had got
ten up had my most favorites cereal an
d went on my way. I was running a few minutes late so I decided
to take a shortcut through the bushes. As
I came to the beginning of the bushes I caught a glimpse of the warning sign. I didn’t think that much of it so I kept walking. The bushes were very misty and you couldn’t see very much. The track was not clear to me so I did my best to stay on it.
I had kept my journal in my bag because at lunch times I would sit down in a settled environment and write like I had all the time in the world.
I have been writing in my journal ever since I can remember.
Anyway back to the bushes. As I came to a stop I heard a muffled voice down beside me. I looked down startled. The muffling started again, I bent down to see what it was. I saw a glittering sparkle catch my eye. As I got closer and closer to the ground the glittering sparkle became more and more clearer. The I figured it was a fairy.
I asked the fairy what she was doing here, she just looked at me as if I was a giant invading her world.
I kept on following the fairy. We stopped at this place, it was the other side of the bushes. I was home!! I jumped for joy and relief we I saw my house. I said thank-you to the fairy for helping me and the I sprinted to the front door. I opened it and then I saw my family coming across our wooden floors. I then was sent to school to apologize for not coming in that day. As I waited outside the school’s office, I thought about everything that had happened that day. I filled up with all of these happy thoughts.
This is my poem that rm13 did when we came back from the Mount Holdsworth trip.
Water Sounds
I can hear the riffles running past,
The echoing sounds as the river goes under the bridge,
Trees blowing in the path of the rain.
By Sophia Nielsen
Here is my test results for my reading.
I am very pleased with my results.
Poems
We have renecntly done a poem on four pictures.
Here is mine
A cupple of weeks ago we had to do an explantation on the titanic here is mine.
We have just finished our four picture story I am quite pleased with mine.
Here it is
The Amazing Day
It was the beginning of a long day at school. I had got
ten up had my most favorites cereal an
d went on my way. I was running a few minutes late so I decided
to take a shortcut through the bushes. As
I came to the beginning of the bushes I caught a glimpse of the warning sign. I didn’t think that much of it so I kept walking. The bushes were very misty and you couldn’t see very much. The track was not clear to me so I did my best to stay on it.
I had kept my journal in my bag because at lunch times I would sit down in a settled environment and write like I had all the time in the world.
I have been writing in my journal ever since I can remember.
Anyway back to the bushes. As I came to a stop I heard a muffled voice down beside me. I looked down startled. The muffling started again, I bent down to see what it was. I saw a glittering sparkle catch my eye. As I got closer and closer to the ground the glittering sparkle became more and more clearer. The I figured it was a fairy.
I asked the fairy what she was doing here, she just looked at me as if I was a giant invading her world.
I kept on following the fairy. We stopped at this place, it was the other side of the bushes. I was home!! I jumped for joy and relief we I saw my house. I said thank-you to the fairy for helping me and the I sprinted to the front door. I opened it and then I saw my family coming across our wooden floors. I then was sent to school to apologize for not coming in that day. As I waited outside the school’s office, I thought about everything that had happened that day. I filled up with all of these happy thoughts.